Opinion on my video?

[sagthegreat]

I recently started showcasing my cannons on youtube. I would love it if I could get some critique on my video. Thanks!
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[bravootome]

you could attach mounts for flashlight, for night vision.

As about the pengun..it looks cool. The power needs to be more consistent for lead pellets...

[POLAND_SPUD]

Good editing and all. Some people hate music in videos, but I guess it's not that bad.

Overall it's very good. Put it as a video instructable and make a how to on it and you can expect large number of views each day.

[Boomer58cal]

I think you need more info on how it works. At least a glimps of the internals would give the noobs of the world some idea of how it works. Or even a link to other short "How it works" videos could help make your YouTube channel more multifaceted.

Us nerds need some technical info to keep us interested. Just my 2 cents.

[jackssmirkingrevenge]

I think you need more info on how it works. At least a glimps of the internals would give the noobs of the world some idea of how it works.

For commercial purposes, showing how it works is counter-productive

You need a better sabot, a lead pellet is far too heavy.

Have you thought of using aluminium foil? Have a look at this how-to I had made: http://www.spudfiles.com/how-to-databas ... 23677.html

[Boomer58cal]

I think you need more info on how it works. At least a glimps of the internals would give the noobs of the world some idea of how it works.

For commercial purposes, showing how it works is counter-productive

Most of the time when you're marketing something commercially you have a patent to protect you. I think most of us who build their own toys wouldn't buy something of this nature anyhow, but I'm sure you are right nonetheless.

[jackssmirkingrevenge]

True. In any case, here's an instructable.

[cammyd32]

It's not a bad video, it's fairly well put together, but I would certainly lose the music.
Your video is alright, but you probably might want to throw a mention to MrCrowley, who as far as I am aware invented the coaxial in-a-flashlight concept, and to JSR, who made the animation you used on your website, also your instructable could learn a thing or two from MrCrowley's
Finally, I would drop the whole selling it idea, for some reason there's nothing that screams legal liability more than a concealed pengun, especially when a bit of thin steel, unpredictable epoxy and an over zealous pumper are put into the mix.